Kian’s story starter

Day 1    Kian

Today I was on the Starburst travelling the world with my mum, dad and presus dog Steler Artware, we were driving smoothly. The Starburst was bursting with fun and could see the stars and we could see the stars every night that’s why we called it the ‘Starburst’! We bought the boat when mum and dad got made redundant from the brik factry. Plus it’s better because we get to see each other every day but the sad thing is that there is no room and I sleep on an inverted camp bed from when we whent camping on weekends.

 

I think the way Kian has explained how his boat got its name is excellent, this has really made me want to read more about the story – what do you think?