51 thoughts on “Wonderful Writing!”

  1. Name: Sebastian
    L.O. To write an Anglo-Saxon battle cry.
    “Everyone come here… Who are we? Why are we.
    Alive? We are alive because. We need to fight! Not just because we need to fight for freedom. But because we need to save our villagers! From the Anglo-Saxons! We are not going to run or hide. I’m all over the Anglo-Saxons. Anyway I’m Alfred. If you want to save everyone by everyone, then fight with me!” Screamed Alfred.
    “Sons and daughters of the great village of Turtan, I have gathered you here today because we need to pull together as a family and beat back the vicious, Viking forces. For generations, we have suffered from these dastardly demons attacking us and taking our belongings, our children and our hope. I say we can beat this this evil. Not in the future, not when they’re ready, but there and now!” bellowed Alfred.

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  2. I liked when Sebastian said, “Who are we? Why are we alive?” it makes the speech more interesting and it makes me wonder why are we alive?

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  3. What an inspirational speech!
    Inverted commas!

    Name: Abigail
    L.O. To write an Anglo-Saxon battle cry.
    Abigail looked over the wall and was horrified for what was there, thousands of demon like creatures. She shot to tell the village about the Vikings coming. So this meant war…
    ”Sons and daughters or Lower Rasten, I’m Abigail and it’s time to go against our most biggest foe. For centres we have suffered from there’s cruel people tormenting and trying to massacre you. We will not hang our heads and crawl away. I am Abigail, not some mythical create or breathe fire.” She yelled
    The people of Lower Rawsten were scared for years but this time is the last. More and more came to fight.
    “You might or you might not see the bright sun on this hill rise again so take a minute and ask yourself, do I want to be remembered for running away or for standing up to or enemies? Your our free people so you can do what you want, so please fight with me. So what do we do, we fight not runaway like cowards! Who is with me?”

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  4. I like the Black Panther reference!
    Great speech!

    Name: Alfie
    L.O. To write an Anglo – Saxon battle cry.
    Alfie watched over the sea like a Hawk as if there was danger. There was. Alfie rushed over to his men
    “People of Bolton, it’s been rough it’s been tough. But they have god knows how many ships. They are no different than us, they don’t eat different food, they are the same people. They can win, we can win so who’s with me!!!!” screeched Alfie.
    Bolton had a bit hope, but others didn’t.
    Some are worried, some are questioning my actions. But trust me, we believe and we smash are achievements and goals. So run, alive for a short distance of time, fight, you may die or risk your life for, but we still can win. We will end this now!!! England forever!

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  5. This is1 an excellent piece of writing!
    Good use of modal verbs!

    Name: Alize
    L.O. To write an Anglo-Saxon battle cry.
    Bolton was being invaded by Vikings, so a young man from Bolton gave a speech so everybody would fight.
    “Children of Bolton, I am Alfred. I’ve been watching the Vikings
    invade us and nobody’s done anything about it.
    We need to start fighting them. I know you guys don’t want to fight, but we need to, not only for ourselves but for all of Bolton. I know you’re scared we all are but it doesn’t have to be this way, we can just fight them and it will all be over,” said the young man named Alfred.
    Everybody started cheering for him and decided to go and fight with him, because they listened to him they ended up winning and they were really happy. Alfred was remembered for many generations. The End.

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  6. * You’ve written an excellent, motivational speech!
    * Inverted commas!

    Name: Amellia-Rose
    L.O. To write an Anglo-Saxon battle cry.
    From the chief’s hall Alfred looked over his village to see Vikings sailing in on the horizon. He ran down to his village and called to his people.
    “People of Wessex, sons, daughters, mothers, fathers, young, old, I am Alfred but not the one you have heard about” Yes Alfred is ten feet tall” “I am just one of you today we will fight. Day after day, week after week, year after year, we are battling and being defeated but not this time. No more shall we obey the tyrant. No more shall we be chained by fear- we are strong and will become victorious.”
    Alfred’s people started to gain hope but some thought they could just run.
    “You can run and hide but you won’t live any longer than us- if you fight you might die but the Vikings are strong enough to take that chance and so are we. We are stronger than the Vikings! If you fight your name will echo in history if not you will regret not fighting. When you fight you will be remembered as the people who beat the Vikings. You will provide food for your children and their children. Today tomorrow next month next year we will still fight for good and good only. What we accomplish today will determine our destiny! We will win. For Wessex!”

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  7. * You’ve tried very hard to complete this work!
    * Inverted commas!

    Name: Tyran
    L.O. To write an Anglo-Saxon battle cry.
    Tyran looked out over the water and was horrified to see thirty huge Vikings ships approach to battle to kill all the Anglo Saxons to take the land off them!
    “Sons of Scotland, the time has come to kill the Vikings so they don’t take our land so we don’t die because they will get dog’s on us to eat our flesh or our guts from our body!
    “Vikings have got the mighty warriors in the wold because the will get us so they can kill or have us as slaves!” We cannot be slaves anymore because we need a plan to get out of hear!”

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  8. I loved your opening sentences! Very funny!
    Parenthesis!

    Name: Ben
    L.O. To write an Anglo-Saxon battle cry.
    Bob was in the hot, cosy and nice bath when about fifty ships came. On them were blood thirty monsters (aka the Vikings) coming towards their land. Bob was terrified, racing outside in his pyjamas made from wool and leather he stood up nice and tall.
    “You are brave people I won’t stand here and see you run away. But you have a choice; if you run you will survive one day more”.

    The people of the Anglo-Saxon village still hung their heads in fear.
    “You have ten minutes to choose, fight and be a hero and save the people you love”.

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  9. * Well done, you’ve written a strong piece of writing!
    * Wonderful use of vocabulary!

    Name: Caprice
    L.O. To write an Anglo-Saxon battle cry.
    Alfred looked over the water and was terrified to see the Vikings ships approach his land and so he ran to his village to help him fight the evil Vikings.
    “Hello brothers and sisters of our village/Turton. I have gathered you up all today to help me fight the Vikings whilst the travel closer to our village. We might die? I know we have lost are past battles. It’s are time now to prove how weak they are. They are little ants and bugs to us. We are strong and tall so run now if you’re scared now!!!”
    There were some people who had hope; others didn’t want to come but little did they know more was coming for them , lots more what will convince them to come but most might hide. We don’t know.
    “Some of you want to come but you’ll die some day. When you are at your house you will think back on your life from then and want to go back in time and actually do it. We should do it for the future and are future. So from this day people will remember this story and are names and don’t worry ill come with you. I might die with you so lets do this and FIGHT!!!”

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  10. * Well done, you’ve written a strong piece of writing!
    * Wonderful use of vocabulary!

    Name: Caprice
    L.O. To write an Anglo-Saxon battle cry.
    Alfred looked over the water and was terrified to see the Vikings ships approach his land and so he ran to his village to help him fight the evil Vikings.
    “Hello brothers and sisters of our village/Turton. I have gathered you up all today to help me fight the Vikings whilst the travel closer to our village. We might die? I know we have lost are past battles. It’s are time now to prove how weak they are. They are little ants and bugs to us. We are strong and tall so run now if you’re scared now!!!”
    There were some people who had hope; others didn’t want to come but little did they know more was coming for them , lots more what will convince them to come but most might hide. We don’t know.
    “Some of you want to come but you’ll die some day. When you are at your house you will think back on your life from then and want to go back in time and actually do it. We should do it for the future and are future. So from this day people will remember this story and are names and don’t worry ill come with you. I might die with you so lets do this and FIGHT!!!”

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  11. * I loved so much of this speech, well done – you’ve worked extremely hard!
    * Excellent range of vocabulary and sentence types!

    Name:Skye
    L.O. To write an Anglo-Saxon battle cry.
    The leader (AKA Elizabearth) loomed over the icy, blue water and thought if she should fight the Vikings. She heard that they were going to destroy their little, cozy village. She gathered all the people from thevillage into the forest.
    “ Brotheres and Sisters of Melville, it’s time we went against our wretched, disagreeable and unpleasant foe. I am your leader ( AKA Elizabearth), not the person who moves stuff with there eyes. For decades, we have suffered the pain of the Vikings, but today I say it stops. No more shall we suffer. No more shall we be treated like no-bodies!” exclaimed the leader.
    The people of Melville looked more elated, but some still looked fornlorn.
    “ You might not see the sun rise or fall, but you’ll see the golden gates of victory. We will win but we might lose some people on the way to sucsess. We will be remembered as heros. Are you with me!” mumbled the leader happily.

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  12. * I loved your simile, ’howling like dogs’ – very creative!
    * Good use of modal verbs!

    Name: Casmier
    L.O. To write an Anglo-Saxon battle cry.
    Charles went and looked at the sea he could see twenty seven huge Viking ships approaching his way after this he got on his horse and rod back to the village and gathered all the villagers together into a group.
    “Sons of Clifton, it is time to stand up for ourselves and fight for freedom. For generations we have suffered pain and loads of different foes, mostly the Vikings. We can’t stay like this forever and let people lose their children and be used as slaves. No more shall we be ruled by over countries or conquered over fear!” Demanded Charles!
    As Charles said that some people were getting happier and stronger but some people were still howling like dogs.
    “If you follow me into battle you might die but at least you will die in honour you will die one day any way and if you run away you will survive but day after day you will wish you never ran away and when we defeat the Vikings we will be remembered and whatever we do will echo on in eternity.”

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  13. * Well done Summer, you should be proud of this work, I certainly am!
    * Inverted commas and punctuation!

    Name: Summer W
    L.O. To write an Anglo-Saxon battle cry.
    Alfred looked out over the water and was horrified to see thirty huge Viking ships approaching the coast like a horde of demons escaping from hell. He ran back to the village we gathered our people together in the universe.
    “Sons and daughters of the great towns of Kersley, I have gathered you hear today because we need to fight the vicious, Viking forces because we have suffered the evilness for generations, and we can’t cope with this any more1”
    The people of Kersley started to look more hopeful, but there were still a few who looked apprehensive.
    “Some of you look worried, some of you don’t, what makes us any different than any any other little village At least we’ll die with honour!”

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  14. * Well done, you’ve wrote a truly inspiring speech!
    * Great use of sentence types!

    Name: Ruby-Anne Rebecca Weaver
    L.O. To write an Anglo-Saxon battle cry.
    Warrior Weaver looked at the stars she was panic-stricken. The stars made a shape of a Viking boat.
    “Boys and girls of Kearsley West, it’s time we fight the ‘panic-stricken’ Vikings. For millennia. We have suffered under the rule of the creature known as the Vikings.”
    The people of kearsley west started to look more helpful, but there were still a few who looked apprehensive.
    “No more will we hang our heads in shame. No more villages will burn. You might die but you will die in the love of your family. We will be echoes in eternity!” shouted Warrior Weaver.

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  15. * Well done, you’ve put forth a strong argument!
    * Good use of adverbials of time!

    Name Charlie
    L.O. To write an Anglo-Saxon battle cry.
    Ruby looked out into the water and was terrified. There was 100 Viking ships approaching the island. The Vikings were one hour away and everyone was running around scared, so she decided to do a motivational speech.
    When they did the speech everybody said ok we will go but will we die. She said “Yes you might live today day but you will die anyway and at least you will die as a hero and not a coward. So are you in with me to save the world well our kingdom.” bellowed Ruby.
    When the Vikings get here we will be prepared with weapons to be ready to fight battle right. We shall run and live well at least for a while.
    While they was entering the battle they heard swinging swords, canons being loaded, bow an arrows being repaired to be used. They were all shivering for what they heard.
    Then ……..

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  16. * Good use of emotive language!
    * Parenthesis!

    Name: Charlie G
    L.O. To write an Anglo-Saxon battle cry.
    Alfred looked out over the river and was scared (AKA to see thirty huge battle ships) coming towards the village and he gathered his people from the centre.
    “Sons and daughters of the great village of Kersley, I have gathered you hear today because we need to pull together a family to beet those pesky vicious Vikings, and we have suffered those Vikings but today is the day we will bring back freedom and stop them taking our belongings and our children. And the evil ends today. I say we can beat them but we might think cant not in future. Not when they’re ready when we are ready!”
    The people of Kearsley looked hopeful because we was winning might, but some still fill apprehensive because the battle is not over so they could still win them pesky horrible Vikings, but there is still time so they could win.
    “Some of you look worried. Some of you might be worrying about this but if you die you die you would want to win to bring freedom back to England and we will kill them and get our belongings back and our children!”

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  17. * Good catching up with this writing!
    * Inverted commas!

    Name: Mckenzie!
    L.O. To write an Anglo-Saxon battle cry.
    Mckenzie looked out over the water and was horrified to see thirty huge Viking ships approaching the coast like a horde of demons escaping from hell. He ran back to the village and gathered his people together in the centre.
    “People of the village the time has come to us we are tired of doing all of this work we… have… to… kill… the… tranaflax. This has gone too far, let’s fight and end this evil tirade!” cried McKenzie the Merciless!

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  18. * Well done, you’ve worked hard on this piece of writing!
    * Good use of vocabulary!

    Name: Chloe Ann Warburton
    L.O. To write an Anglo-Saxon battle cry.
    “Sons and daughters of Lower Rawson it is time we took a stand against our drakes foe for generating we have suffered under the ruler of this tyrant for too long after your far as I can remember no more shall we you building of this this ruler, No more shall we stand by the foe it might be the same you might see the dewing of a new down. Can we protect your children from the Vikings and the Viking a horrible! Bellow Lucy.”
    The people lower Rawson starter to look more hopeful but there were still a few who still looked the same as they started out of so he kept on doing the speech!!!
    “Some of you look still worried. Some of you are questioning what makes this rid different what makes us you any different than any other little village. I say that if you run you may live for another day but you will live with shame in your heart. We need to stand up together and fight back even if we die at least we will die with you knowing you tried helping your family and our legends will go on!!”continued Lucy…

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  19. * I enjoyed reading your battle cry, it was fun to read.
    * Good use of words and phrases!

    Name: Matthew
    L.O. To write an Anglo-Saxon battle cry.
    Tom looked and saw Anglo Saxons come running towards the town, Tom ran to the town and told people.
    “People of Bolton, this is important there are Saxons coming”. “We are in danger”. “Who is with me you know what all of you can fight with me”. “Run and you may still die but come help us all”. “We will beat the Anglo Saxons so fight with me FOREVER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!”
    They all looked ready some were just in the odds still. They were not sure at all.
    “You looked scared”. “I’m terrified”. “We all are but don’t worry I will be there with you I will be aside you always now come with me and we will fight for glory”. “For freedom”. “We are amazing”. “Bolton is amazing WHO’S WITH ME then let the battle commence.” “I’m Tom Kelp”

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  20. * Every single piece of writing you’ve done for this unit has gotten better and better – I loved this battle cry!
    * Excellent use of imaginative ideas and creative use of language!

    Name: Daisy
    L.O. To write an Anglo-Saxon battle cry.
    Millow looked deep down into the water hole and saw the fear in her eyes. She took a glance at the ocean and saw the biggest ships she had ever seen in her life.
    “Brothers and sisters of Turton, I have an announcement to make. The Vikings are heading towards us. Now might be our last chance to fight, so let’s give them what they want. For years, generations and even eternity’s we have been suffering ,let’s stop that!” Blabbered Millow
    Some of the more inspired people of Turton started to gain hope; others weren’t as hopeful.
    “Some of you don’t look as hopeful as others. No more shall we have to fight, no more shall we have to suffer let’s end this once and for all. It might be dangerous, we might die but let’s fight for the future. We will die if we let them fight. What we do today will echo in eternity.

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  21. * Well done, you have used some good literacy skills!
    * Inverted commas!

    Name: Maryam
    L.O. To write an Anglo-Saxon battle cry.
    “Sons and daughter of the great village of
    Bolton. I have gathered you all here today because we need to pull together as a family. We are a united front and those vicious Vikings need forcing back to where they belong!”
    We will fight for our family!
    We will fight for our freedom!
    Some of us might die, but we are helping our people, so we must fight. We can win this! Even if a few die trying-it’s our children’s future we need to protect.
    LET’S DO THIS!

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  22. * What a truly inspiring piece of writing – I’d follow you into battle!
    * Excellent range of sentences!

    Name: Maggie
    L.O. To write an Anglo-Saxon battle cry.
    Fred watched all of the destruction in front of him, he knew what stood in front of him used to be a calm, peaceful village, before the Vikings came. A nice place in the south coast of Sussex destroyed. He wanted revenge he thought to himself, why is it always me? He ran back to the woods in quick pace and vowed he would protect his fellow towns folk.
    “Sons and daughters of Sussex, we must fight against our greatest foe, the Vikings. For many decades now, we have lived under the shadow of the tyrant, who we also call the Vikings, for days after days month after month now years after years. No more shall we stay in the cage of fear. No more shall we watch our people suffer and pass away.” Fred yelled vigorously so his people could hear.
    The people of Sussex muttered under their breath saying “sons and daughters, he must have gone mad.” Fred could barely hear them but he knew they were muttering about his speech. Some people already wanted to fight , others wanted to run even if it was their last chance.
    “We might ride into battle and come back but I can guarantee you might not come back , there might be a big chance of dying if you run away.” “If you fight you’ll make a brighter future for your children, for your family!” “ We will win this like all the battles we fought and won, we will define destiny!”

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  23. * Well done Dylan, this is a very strong piece of writing!
    * You’ve magpie a lot of great ideas and made them your own!

    Name: Dylan
    L.O. To write an Anglo-Saxon battle cry
    Kilo looked out over the sea and thought to see at least 50 Viking battle ships. They were closing in and looked like the gaping jaws of hell.
    “People of Farnworth, I am Kilo. We are under attack by the Vikings and I need you to fight. For as long as I have lived, we have been suffering, some ever slaughtered, by the evil of the Vikings. No more, shall we go to sleep worried, No more shall we let evil reign. We will fight!!!”
    As Kilo worried more he slowly looked back and only saw ships he got more and more worried. What he did not know was that they were planning.
    “Well now you know why I’m here .I need to tell you something else. I cannot promise or confirm everyone will come back alive. But if you don’t fight there won’t go a day without regret those who do won’t regret it. Now fight not just for yourself but for freedom. We Echoes in eternity!” bellowed Kilo

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  24. * Great work, you’ve been very inspiring here!
    * Good use of exclamations!

    Name: Eloise
    L.O. To write an Anglo-Saxon battle cry.
    “All of you get up and fight for our country everyone is counting on us. If we go home now and tell them that we are to chicken to go and fight they are going to be disappointed in us. So come and fight with me and win, yes win. If you’re wondering how I know is because I can feel it in my bones. You probably think I’m crazy, but is true I can feel it. IM BEING SEARIOUS!!!!”
    “Why do you not want to fight for our people and freedom? Personally I think fighting for our people and freedom is the best thing you could do because your helping people. You could die but you died for the life of your people so people will thank you for saving them and their children. your family will miss you and us who didn’t die will miss you to. Any of us but do it for freedom could die even me. And if you run you will live for a few more years. But we will be a laugh in show for being to scared. I know you are all scared but do it for family and the country. I know you want to but you’re a chicken’s. But are you all in…. wahawaha are you all in yayay. Come one lets fight the angels. WE WILL WIN THIS THING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!”

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  25. * Wow, you’ve done a great job and the amount you’ve written is very commendable!
    * Great range of words, phrases and sentences!

    Name: Lacey S
    L.O. To write an Anglo-Saxon battle cry.
    Charles looked over the water and was horrified for what he saw, he saw a big silver ship and it was heading are way it was the VIKINGS yes the Viking just saying that world made Charles sick. He quickly ran back to the village and gathered his people saying.
    “Brothers and sisters, Sons of England, My name is Charles I am not the 6 foot tall fire-breathing warrior you have heard of, ha ha ha, Any way I am one of you and I am here to fight for our friends and family, my team, for freedom, for our world the queen everyone special in the world and for us.. You’re here today to show me how brave you are and how much of a warrior you are. You should believe in yourself if not we believe in you, I believe in you, the whole country believe in you, even god believe in you. Well I mean it is your choice so think quickly because battle is heading to us. Just take a slight second, and think what you are getting yourself in to your doing this for our friends and family for are world just think how much of a hero you would be for the world!”
    The people of England looked more confident and ready they have ever been before for a battle with the Vikings some of them looked clumsy and lazy but strong, but suddenly that change.
    Yes we may die but at least we will die with houner and confidence for our world. Also as a hero for a kingdom. For as long as I can remember, me and my friends survived .

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  26. * Well done, you have worked hard to produce this work!
    * You’ve used emotive language and phrases!

    Name: Lacey Elizabeth Jackson
    L.O. To write an Anglo-Saxon battle cry.
    Elija looked out her window and was shamed to see all her folks of Masefield be hung and shot at with arrows. She ran out side. Sounded the predator alarm and gathered all her folks.
    “Sons and daughters of Masefield, I am Elija. Not the legendary blinding 10ft tall warrior you expected I am one of you. For decades we have been defeated by these evil treacherous Vikings. No more. ”whispered Elija.
    Elija sneakily slithered like a snake and looked out the window. The Vikings were still in position.
    “Today will be the day we fight. Today shall be the day we win. No more shall we lose our children. No more shall we lose our prize possession. We will fight…and we will win! Masefield forever!!!!!” she shouted as quiet as she could trying not to attract the Vikings.

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  27. * Well done, you have done incredibly well to catch up with this work!
    * Good use of alliteration!

    Name: Finley
    L.O. To write an Anglo-Saxon battle cry.
    Finley looked out over the water and was horrified to see thirty huge Viking ships approaching the coast like a horde of demons escaping from hell. He ran back to the village and gathered his people together in the centre and said.
    “I know we have been beaten once before, but if we stick together and attack like wild animals, we could win for once! We can fight? or we can run? Either way- our lives are ruined for good, if we don’t try.
    Who wants to be a hero? Who wants to be remembered for standing up and taking back what is ours?! –I KNOW I DO! Who’s with me? “ cried Finley the Fearless.

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  28. * This is a brilliant inspirational speech!
    * Great use of language!

    Name: Lacey Curren
    L.O. To write an Anglo-Saxon battle cry.
    Archy peered through his window and spotted three Viking boats heading right towards the Anglo Saxon village. Quickly, he rushed to warn the other village people and get ready for war.
    “Brothers and sisters, I have gathered you hear today because we now need to stand up for ourselves against the vicious Vikings and fight. Years and years we have fought and lost, you just have to believe you will succeed.”
    The Anglo-Saxon villagers now started to feel better about fighting.
    “We shall no longer suffer and watch our best friends get hurt by them”, Archy’s voice got louder. “What we do today will echo in all eternity. No more we will cry. No more we will hide in fear. We might die, we might live. If you run you will live, but every night you will always remember what you did. What we do today will determine your destiny”.

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  29. * You’ve written a very motivating battle cry!
    * Wonderful choice of words and phrases!

    Name: Hollie M
    L.O. To write an Anglo-Saxon battle cry.
    King Ecgberht looked out of his humongous castle and looked at all of the people standing outside after an invasion from the evil Vikings, He went down to make a speech …
    “Sons and daughters of Wessex it is time to take revenge and fight against the evil of the Vikings and try to find the good side of the Vikings because I know it is in there”
    Egberht realised the people looked more hopeful and happy, I will keep going on with the speech and tell them who I am.
    “I am king Ecgberht, the mighty warrior of human kind. We have been suffering-time for nearly a millennium near enough and that is a really long time- no more will we lose hope. No one will run or hide because you will only live for a couple of days, if you are lucky maybe a week. You might die during our war against them but it will be better than in bed with pain we are like a family here we will fight and hopefully win!”

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  30. * Good use of vocabulary!
    * Informal language!

    Name: Kayden
    L.O. To write an Anglo-Saxon battle cry.
    “Brothers and sisters I want us to work together to keep what is ours. Year after year, the bad guys have tried to take us down, treating us like dirt on their shoe!
    IT STOPS TODAY!
    We are stronger and braver and cleverer than those limp losers. We might get hurt?… but we won’t go down without putting up a battle for freedom!
    What we change today- makes a hopeful tomorrow. LET’S FIGHT!”

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  31. * Well done, you’ve use some inspiring phrases!
    * Inverted commas!

    Name: James S
    L.O. To write an Anglo-Saxon battle cry.
    Alfred looked over the massive fence and he saw horrifying Vikings standing behind the fence they were shouting he told them a plan.
    “Sons and daughters of Bolton we shouldn’t get beaten we shall no more cower like a dump dogs no more be beaten. We can’t lose we need some freedom they shall not get freedom we shall get that freedom. We’ve been suffering for too long. We shall win!!! Are you with me! Are you with me! Are you with me!”
    The people of Bolton, you are turning more helpful there’s someone that’s moody.
    “Some of you look terrified. You might die if you die you won’t get any freedom if you need to ask a question save them in till last we now should get the battle started. Let’s win the battle not lose we shall now let the battle commence let’s get it started.”

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  32. * You have written some inspirational sentences!
    * Good use of modal verbs!

    Name: Kaitlyn Barrick
    L.O. To write an Anglo-Saxon battle cry.
    “People of Davyhulme, it is time we stud up against are worst fear. For many years now we have suffered from the Vikings. No more shall we do this, we can’t run or hide in our huts, if we die we die together”.
    “We will be remembered for the work we have done over the few years. What we do today will determine our destiny forever until we are ghosts”.

    “Sons and daughters of West Wood, I want you to fight. Now I know you’ve had a tough time but its ok, I have too, so please come!”

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