Kearsley West - Year 4 Blog
Freya has a secret: she is a magical mermaid!!!!
Freya has no friends: she is new to the real world.
Eliza is a little,young girl who lived with her father. She saw a kind mermaid on land! The mermaid has no fish tail because she is on land.
Some people think that mermaids are real; others think mermaids are just fake. They all think they’re a mythical creatures.
Some people think the little girl is a thief; others think she’s a nice little girl.
Mermaids are fast; they swim fast.
I think the story so far is good but the Eliza was nice at first then she got a friend, who was secretly a mermaid and she took a thing from her home. She could go back and Eliza found the the mermaid the mermaid’s mirror. She hid it away from the mermaid and if she lost the mirror she was stuck on land.
Some people like mermaid; others hate them. Mermaids are nice most of the time nice; others aren’t.
Description Detail: Freya is a young mermaid:she can only get back in the ocean if she has her mirror at all times.
Ad same Ad:Freya is a gorgeous mermaid,gorgeous because she has multicolored streaks in her hair.
Some; Others:Some people think Freya is a mermaid; others think she is a human.
Freya has a mirror: it is special because without it she can’t go home.
Freya has beautiful long golden locks. She is a very nice girl but she has no friends.